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Б.</given-names></name><name name-style="western" xml:lang="en"><surname>Hassani</surname><given-names>J. B.</given-names></name></name-alternatives><bio xml:lang="ru"><p>Джавад Бойер Хассани</p><p>Исфахан</p></bio><bio xml:lang="en"><p>Javad Boyer Hassani</p><p>Isfahan</p></bio><email xlink:type="simple">javadboyer@gmail.com</email><xref ref-type="aff" rid="aff-1"/></contrib><contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="yes"><contrib-id contrib-id-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-6701-8366</contrib-id><name-alternatives><name name-style="eastern" xml:lang="ru"><surname>Чалак</surname><given-names>А.</given-names></name><name name-style="western" xml:lang="en"><surname>Chalak</surname><given-names>A.</given-names></name></name-alternatives><bio xml:lang="ru"><p>Азизех Чалак</p><p>Исфахан</p></bio><bio xml:lang="en"><p>Azizeh Chalak</p><p>Isfahan</p></bio><email xlink:type="simple">azichalak@gmail.com</email><xref ref-type="aff" rid="aff-1"/></contrib><contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="yes"><contrib-id contrib-id-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-9360-1555</contrib-id><name-alternatives><name name-style="eastern" xml:lang="ru"><surname>Табризи</surname><given-names>Х. Х.</given-names></name><name name-style="western" xml:lang="en"><surname>Tabrizi</surname><given-names>H. H.</given-names></name></name-alternatives><bio xml:lang="ru"><p>Хоссейн Хейдари Табризи</p><p>Исфахан</p></bio><bio xml:lang="en"><p>Hossein Heidari Tabrizi</p><p>Isfahan</p></bio><email xlink:type="simple">heidaritabrizi@gmail.com</email><xref ref-type="aff" rid="aff-1"/></contrib></contrib-group><aff-alternatives id="aff-1"><aff xml:lang="ru"><institution>Исламский университет Азад</institution><country>Иран</country></aff><aff xml:lang="en"><institution>Islamic Azad University</institution><country>Islamic Republic of Iran</country></aff></aff-alternatives><pub-date pub-type="collection"><year>2023</year></pub-date><pub-date pub-type="epub"><day>30</day><month>09</month><year>2025</year></pub-date><volume>18</volume><issue>1</issue><fpage>26</fpage><lpage>42</lpage><permissions><copyright-statement>Copyright &amp;#x00A9; Хассани Д.Б., Чалак А., Табризи Х.Х., 2025</copyright-statement><copyright-year>2025</copyright-year><copyright-holder xml:lang="ru">Хассани Д.Б., Чалак А., Табризи Х.Х.</copyright-holder><copyright-holder xml:lang="en">Hassani J.B., Chalak A., Tabrizi H.H.</copyright-holder><license xml:lang="ru" license-type="creative-commons-attribution" xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/" xlink:type="simple"><license-p>Данная работа распространяется под лицензией Creative Commons Attribution 4.0.</license-p></license><license xml:lang="en" license-type="creative-commons-attribution" xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/" xlink:type="simple"><license-p>This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.</license-p></license></permissions><self-uri xlink:href="https://kvmolur.elpub.ru/jour/article/view/33">https://kvmolur.elpub.ru/jour/article/view/33</self-uri><abstract><p>В настоящем исследовании изучалось влияние синхронной и асинхронной компьютерной обратной связи от одногруппников на развитие письменной речи кандидатов IELTS. При помощи случайной выборки были отобраны 132 студента из шести групп, проходящих обучение в английском языковом центре. Участники исследования были разделены на три равные группы: две экспериментальные, учащиеся которых получали синхронную и асинхронную компьютерную обратную связь, и одну контрольную. Данные были получены с помощью пробного теста на знание английского языка и шкалы синхронного и асинхронного оценивания письменного текста. Для статистического анализа данных использовались однофакторный дисперсионный анализ (ANOVA) и критерий хи-квадрат. Было выявлено, что обратная связь, полученная по компьютеру, оказалась эффективнее традиционной формы обратной связи в виде комментариев, сделанных на полях тетради. Участники асинхронной группы успешно справились с заданиями, чем студенты синхронной группы. Результаты также выявили, что чаще всего частники обеих экспериментальных группы использовали директивный вид обратной связи. Однако в частоте использования различных видов директивной обратной связи были расхождения. В синхронной группе студенты, как правило, использовали рекомендации и предложения, в асинхронной группе чаще использовалась обратная связь в виде инструкций. С учетом полученных результатов учителям рекомендуется использовать асинхронную обратную связь, чтобы повысить качество письменной речи учащихся.</p></abstract><trans-abstract xml:lang="en"><p>The present study investigated the eﬀect of synchronous and asynchronous computer-mediated peer feedback on IELTS candidates’ writing improvement and interactions. In so doing, 132 IELTS candidates from an English language center in six writing classes were chosen based on the convenience sampling procedure. They were split into three equal groups: two experimental groups that were instructed through synchronous peer feedback and asynchronous computer-mediated feedback and one control group. The data were collected using a sample English language proﬁciency test and synchronous and asynchronous media writing scoring rubric. One-way ANOVA and Chi-square test were applied for the statistical analysis of the data. It was revealed that L2 learners beneﬁted more from the computer-mediated peer feedback than conventional paper and pencil peer feedback. Further, the participants in the asynchronous group noticeably exceeded the IELTS candidates in the synchronous group. The results also showed that the most frequent feedback in both experimental groups was directive feedback. However, there were some discrepancies in the frequency of various directive subcategories. Suggestion was the most frequent directive subcategory reported by the synchronous group and instruction feedback was the most repeated one in the asynchronous group. On the basis of the ﬁndings of the study, instructors were advised to employ asynchronous feedback whenever possible to maximize their learners’ writing accuracy.</p></trans-abstract><kwd-group xml:lang="ru"><kwd>асинхронный</kwd><kwd>компьютерная обратная связь</kwd><kwd>IELTS</kwd><kwd>взаимодействие</kwd><kwd>синхронный</kwd></kwd-group><kwd-group xml:lang="en"><kwd>asynchronous</kwd><kwd>computer-mediated feedback</kwd><kwd>IELTS</kwd><kwd>interaction</kwd><kwd>synchronous</kwd></kwd-group></article-meta></front><back><ref-list><title>References</title><ref id="cit1"><label>1</label><citation-alternatives><mixed-citation xml:lang="ru">Abuseileek, A. F., &amp; AbuAlsha’r, A. M. (2012). The eﬀect of computer-mediated communication cooperative learning structures and techniques on improving EFL learners' speaking skill. International Journal of Learning Technology, 7(4), 334-352. https://doi.org/10.1504/IJLT.2012.052210</mixed-citation><mixed-citation xml:lang="en">Abuseileek, A. 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